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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  I like what you have written however it was hard to tell what you are exactly on RHP for.Also pic are important so get rid of your webcam pics (as they are never really flattering) and get some photos of you out with friends, looking cool and having fun.Your pics will then show that you are happy and fun with a social life not just some dweeby guy who sits on his pc all dayxxJess

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  You only want friends right? Hmmm.......... NEXT! Sorry but thats how it reads to me. Kisses Focus

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  Thanks Focus/Jessie just the sort of thing I was looking for

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  I'm with focus It does indeed sound like you are looking for just friends ..... and not really anything more ..... If you want sex ..... you might want to change it slightly .. but that is just my opinion

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  Quoting 'frocker' I'm with focus It does indeed sound like you are looking for just friends ..... and not really anything more ..... If you want sex ..... you might want to change it slightly .. but that is just my opinion I'm trying to find a happy medium between a 1 string guitar and LJBF (lets just be friends). Ofcourse I'm a red blooded male like most guys on this site and looking for the physical I'm also not just a one trick pony... I guess I over think the way I'm seen and should just put down the basics

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  Hi honey, First of all, good on you for having the good sense to ask the community for help! I've only been on here for a week or so, but have found it to be a very supportive and fun community so far. You'll go a long way with such a great attitude to learning from your peers. Have you read any profiles other guys have written? There are some really good ones out there to give you ideas. There are also some really dumb ones. Read about 100 or so to get the gist of the good ones. They stand out. Don't make your profile too long. While it's true that the more you write, the better chance the reader has to get to know you, it's also true that if you write too much the reader loses interest before they've got to the end. Your profile is a bit of a ramble, like a stream of consciousness. Makes sense to you, because you wrote it. A good profile doesn't repeat any one point. The reader can reread a profile many times, so repeating yourself makes the reader feel like you don't really believe what you're writing, or that you can't follow a sensible train of thought. Gives the impression that you're erratic and all over the place. Organise your thoughts coherantly. Each thought should follow from the previous in a logical way. To begin with, write everything in point form, before you expand on those thoughts. You'll quickly realise what makes sense when you start out by keeping it brief. Don't write negative things or say what you don't want. If you've made it clear what you do want, that's enough. Focus on the positive and you'll attract positive people. Think about who you want to attract Is it a fun, exciting cougar to teach you all about sex, life and love? Is it someone your own age who enjoys clubs, dvds and pubbling? Is it a bi curious man to explore your bi side? Decide and state your preference. Vague only attracts vague. In conclusion, the best way to do all this, is, work out what you want to say. Here's just one example: Looking for friends with benefits Have a good life that I enjoy Don't mind meeting people just to hang out with, but happy to find someone very special too Then, expand on each line with one or two more lines about yourself. Write with warmth and humour, but don't try to be funny if you're not. Hope this gives you some ideas. Keep working on it though. A good profile does tend to evolve with practice. You can always change your user name if you're worried about people taking a second look. Oh, and while I think of it. Crop your photos to show just you. The one with the girls faces spray painted out looks a little creepy. Good luck and hugs Sparkles1963 xxxxx

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  I think that you should say that ..... Say you arent up for a one off........ but that you arent neccessarily looking for a white pickett fence either .... if you want a friend with benifits .. say so ... if you are looking for a casual thing ... then say that too .... if you are open to more ..... put that down too .... Be straight about what you are looking for ...... and be clear .... lots of us girls use this because we are busy ... it helps us not waste your time and ours if you are clear ... oh and we dont need to read essays either lol.... just clear and straight to the point .....

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  So to recount1) be clear2) dont waffle3) more social proof photos4)dont repeat myself?I've shortened it up alot and tried to make myself clearer. Let me know what you think. I've gone through my facebook photos and to be honest I dont really have all that many that show me in a good light so I'll see what I can do about having a camera handy at all times.Thanks everyone for their advice

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  Made some changes

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  RHP User

  15 years ago

  Yes us females are also visual beings...... Photos and not of your penis...... Change your photos around..... Good luck Mrs SRFUN

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