Constructive criticism

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  ..." across unfriendly or unapproachable ".......there is absolutely nothing in your profile to warrant that description.

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  There's consistency in your profile from what you say in your 'about us and the interests section' . Myself, I think that your introduction is fine, though I'd rearrange the order of it! I don't think there's any value in stating 'we're a couple in love' straight up front! To me it says 'back of bitches' he's mine 😆, Which is ok but don't start with it! Love that there's pics of both of you, so that's great! I like your profile :) well done and enjoy! Mary xx

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  Your profile is well written, good pictures and if we where in the market for a couple and the same state we'd find it appealing enough to initiate contact.

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  madotara69

  10 years ago

  Bummer you said "constructive critics critique my profile" What does come to mind, after reading your profile is.. Same room, no swapping partners, flirty stuff, no blokes going near the missus, no way, not a chance, so don't even think about asking me mate ! kind of thing With what seems to be 'the golden vernacular for couples seeking fmf ) the female is always bi and it seems to always 'an exception to the rule, 'only play together' The girls can while the guy, guys watch'. Same, never a mention for having a bloke join you, and you stand back and watch him and the missus, she might be bi, no mention she is gay however.brisfuncoupleYour profile is neat and tidy, yet it looks like you say 'we don't do that' with wording hazy around the idea, in between the lines, 'I have not communicated with my wife about all the things I don't want her doing' But I'm communicating with all you now and seeking women we would allow to slip past the boundaries placed for all other's elsewhere .You may well be being completely honest and expressing how keen you are to try new experiences, it's all okey dokey, with best intensions pending the idea you have in mind and inexperienced, naturally we all begin somewhere. If you read through enough couples profiles, by the likes you have in your profile, there would appear to be heaps of couples telling you, what you are telling us, in all manner of wordings a confidant similarity in common, fitting right in. So you sound just like many other couples profiles, (pleasant for you, ready to mingle, so much with commonalities, fun and exiting, fizzing at the bung, where too start and with who first, choices, choices) How's that going for you ? We tried contacting couples of the likes with you and others much the same. Lucky to get a reply, maybe because we have a rule we both agree on, 'we play together' so no- one gets to play the Aces with a Joker in the deck. 'But I let you play with her while I watched, so sexy, your hot, don't you want to watch me go fuck her and give it all I can muster just for you' Apparently that is one thing else, in common with so many couples after they come set up a profile, gone soon after a while, maybe things don't work out so well for it to be so common, the other side of the coin ? Hope this helps and you find it 'constructive critique' everyone deserves a fair shot. Anyhow, I'm a fruit loop, way out there on the reality thingy watsie, so you can wipe the hands on the grounds of that, but you did not say, "no fruit loops today thank you very muchly, It's not worth the bother for me, have a nice day, but no play Ok" You could have said that. Mado Mado Tara xx

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  To critique ours :) Mary xx

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  I think your profile is well thought out and the picture you paint quite clear and not unfriendly at all. I understood exactly what you were saying. Anyone who finds fault with it , is probally not the type of person you have in mind.

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  Quoting 'Hotwives_Inc' To critique ours :) Mary xx Ha! I see you've taken a course in writing profiles ;) I can't complain about your profile, clearly stated at what you are looking for and not looking for without negativity. I think i could use some of those skills for our profile.......

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  N4November

  10 years ago

  If I am interested in meeting a couple it's because I want to share the love! I personally don't like strict boundaries where one can play but the other isn't allowed. It's too controlling and restricts the experience. And if I was desperate for some girl action, it feels a bit cheap while hubby has to get his rocks off by himself. Your profile is great but it doesn't come across that you want to reciprocate. That's probably not the case but that's just my thoughts :-) - Posted from rhpmobile

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  I changed the shouting following your critique-it was a fair call :) Mary xx

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  Quoting 'Hotwives_Inc' To critique ours :) Mary xx More Boobs Ladies,

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  Lovely pics, wowers ms Bris has a damn fine butt! I do agree though that the boundaries you have stated with absolution may be off putting initially. Perhaps leave that to discussion after you have had some contact with potential playmates? In my experience with loads of couples boundaries can be flexible based on the parties involved.....and will most likely change as your journey unfolds. How you interact with a single female may be different to a couple, it will all depend on sexual chemistry, trust and of course what they want/are comfortable with. Good luck!

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  RHP User

  10 years ago

  hi there brisfuncouple78, We kind of agree with some of the others that have commented here that there is some assumption that any meet would be just FF and males will watch from the sidelines. We like your profile other than this, as you like like a pretty stable couple and that is very important in the 'playing with others status'. We also would love some critique of our profile too !!! Given we have commented on others, it would be great to get some feedback. We have been told by another couple in a message that they sent back to us, 'that our profile and message was the most vanilla message they had ever seen on here', and I guess we want to understand what we need to do to get our message across better. Thanks all !! T & S

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  rupamohan

  10 years ago

  Yours is a detailed profile but you could have manged it with lot shorter version. The reason to me is because...most of the details are quiet generic that applies to most...to give just one example "We arn't in this just to have sex with anyone and everyone" Now this probably applies to 95% here...to be honest correct but useless information. The same goes to many other statements. However if this profile works for you then this is the best profile and you really don't need much feedback. There is no universal profile. Everyone is here for something different as so long you can attract what you want and distract what you don't want. It is fine. We like profiles that is either one liner where picture tells all ....or has a useful story. One tip many people don't read all the way and are expecting a swap. So if you are getting too many mismatched approaches. You will benefit to put "NO SWAP" right at the beginning. Sounds bit negative start...but it works if you are getting wrong people to respond. Now if this is really a problem only you know it but if it is not then putting negative statement upfront is not a good idea. In short just tweak your profile as you go with the response that only you will know. It will be alright...

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