Ok rewrite the whole thing.  Honestly I want to know about you, you can use as many charcters as you like its a minimum of not a maximum of.  If that was the case then I and many others have gone well over the limit.

What are you looking for?  Have noticed in some of your forum posts that you are looking for certain thing so why not say that? Do you want to explore your boundaries? Try new things? Like what?

Also be wary of your spelling and punctuation. For some a lazy speller means a lazy lover.  if you take short cuts in the written word what short cuts do you take elsewhere? It also shows to us you can hold your own in conversation.  Remember the mind is one of the most powerful sexual organs.  If you can egage our mind the battle is part way over, you don't engage the mind and we will look elsewhere.

Oh and that car picture - please get rid of it.  I dont like it when someone is rude to me and thats the impression I get from that picture.

Kisses and Good Luck

Focus