Hi Gorgeous, here's what I got from your profile.

You have a tendency toward Irresponsibility.

You are often in trouble, with whom, the law?

You seek women with a poor sense of self esteem.

You promise a great deal, maybe your a Demigod I don't know.

Quite likely some women will read it all as terribly exciting, again I don't know.

Cheers Felonius.....Tone it down a bit, I think.

going to say something similar to felonius and cass.

"'Hi Gorgeous ",will stop me reading further....cringeworthy word.....just because I read your profile I am gorgeous..puhleese.!!

The rest sounds like a hippy yippy pick up line or lines.

Do you really talk like that in real life?If you do ,then don't change a word,at least it's an honest reflection of you.

If you dont really speak like that,THEN WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!!!!x Hugs Swami Hesione

The first thing's I have a look at is what you tick.....thanks for not ticking all of the boxes..and not ticking "ASK ME" .this showed me you where thinking about  what you really want.

Secondly your photos....nooo dick, thank you,  pfff its so nice to see a face, a smile and a sexy body in a towel.

I dont know what you have written before this one sounds ok, however you could put a little bit more spark into it.

Good luck on RHP...its a  wonderful site.

Change your profile as you go along, with time you will chose different wordings because you found out more what you fancy and write it in your profile.